I love the idea of the wonder of the first snowflake. Great idea!! I think that the hair or the face need a different color to define the hair from the face. I like the snowflake where it is. I would leave it there. I also like that there are more snowflakes in the back (the white dots). I might turn the eyes a deeper yellow. For me her eyes are a little hard to look at. I love the hair barrettes. The feathers might look a little better if they were more pronounced. Bigger with more detail on the feathers. The shadowing is great on the bottom of the dress.