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The First Snowflake by TanSugar

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I love the idea of the wonder of the first snowflake. Great idea!! I think that the hair or the face need a different color to define the hair from the face. I like the snowflake where it is. I would leave it there. I also like that there are more snowflakes in the back (the white dots). I might turn the eyes a deeper yellow. For me her eyes are a little hard to look at. I love the hair barrettes. The feathers might look a little better if they were more pronounced. Bigger with more detail on the feathers. The shadowing is great on the bottom of the dress.
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TanSugar Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awww thank you so much for a good critic :iconpapcryplz:
I'll try my best to improve it next time :iconarigatouplz: (because, I don't have any energy left...:iconorzplz:)
Oh, the white dots behind is such a confusing, someone said that they are group of stars. *w*
I'll let them imagine what are they then :aww:
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Leah12345678 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist
You're welcome. I tried to give good advice. It's really a great picture!
Same when I;m painting, I let people decide what they think I painted. :)
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TanSugar Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
And what a surprise!! XD
Their guess are really weird :iconorzplz:
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